Thanks for that

You're right, that sentence in particular doesn't read back very well! I do really, really like sub-clauses though - I blame my extensive time in academia for that! Feedback about the voice is very welcome too, so cheers.

Posted By: Ottosson Foxtrot on October 25th 2010 at 11:53:28


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