Celebrities wearing as little as possible. I've told you. And a Sudoku.
Above the pixelated image: feels a bit tortured. First four paras don't really work.
Fifth para and stuff below the pixelated image feels more natural. That's your voice. Use that. Edit it down a bit.
What are the bogs like in the Murderers these days?
Posted By: Old Man on July 14th 2016 at 10:06:42
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- New ACN Words.... (NCFC) - DJ Worthy, Jul 14, 08:02:21
- Celebrities wearing as little as possible. I've told you. And a Sudoku. (NCFC) - Old Man, Jul 14, 10:06:42
- Thanks Old Man (NCFC) - DJ Worthy, Jul 14, 10:25:00
- no (n/m) (NCFC) - ghostof barry butler, Jul 14, 09:58:39
- your best one yet, chief (n/m) (NCFC) - MIKEWALKER, Jul 14, 09:40:18
- awful (n/m) (NCFC) - Tombs, Jul 14, 09:30:02
- Missed opportunity to include maybe a receipe for shortbread or (NCFC) - Pixelman, Jul 14, 08:50:56
- good idea... (NCFC) - Jumbo1, Jul 14, 09:18:03
- I'd reduce the number of gags and definitely not swear in it. (NCFC) - Tony Martin, Jul 14, 08:38:09
- The new lafferty (NCFC) - hoolahan, Jul 14, 08:20:27
- good stuff, how about adding a recipe? Cheese filled puff pastries (add bacon if you like) (NCFC) - Jumbo1, Jul 14, 08:19:47
- Recipes with measurements in "cups". (NCFC) - Arizona Bay, Jul 14, 10:43:56
- ACJ (n/m) (NCFC) - strap_on sally, Jul 14, 09:05:13
- I may do my own Norwich City inspired recipe webpage - Recipe XI's (n/m) (NCFC) - Jumbo1, Jul 14, 09:26:44
- You love a cheesy filling in your puff (n/m) (NCFC) - Old Git, Jul 14, 08:56:25
- And a Word Search (n/m) (NCFC) - shortfatb, Jul 14, 08:52:25
- Good article (n/m) (NCFC) - colincanary, Jul 14, 08:17:21
- Celebrities wearing as little as possible. I've told you. And a Sudoku. (NCFC) - Old Man, Jul 14, 10:06:42
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