and too few paragraphs
Why is it that more and more people are eschewing the use of the paragraph these days?
Writing in single sentences but about the same topic line after line, sentence after sentence is akin to being poked in the forehead by the author as he clumsily blurts his dull point at the reader.
Surely it isn't too difficult to embrace the entire idea in the form of a paragraph and structure it in such a way that the piece has some rhythm and natural flow?
Simply blurting out standalone sentences is rather a vulgar and lazy way to write is it not?
Forming one's thoughts and ideas in the form of a paragraph allows the writer to convey a sense of spirit and done well, can sear those thoughts forever in the mind of the reader.
It may be however that this is what is taught in our schools these days.
If this is the case then the blame lies with the body that sets the National Curriculum and not the teachers.
Don't shoot the messenger after all.
That would be pointless.
RIP Paragraphs.
Fin
Posted By: Tombs on May 7th 2016 at 09:53:37
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- RE Schools (NCFC) - Larry Hagman, May 7, 00:14:29
- Do people actually read this dullard's ill-informed rubbish? (n/m) (NCFC) - Pygmy bulb, May 7, 08:31:55
- I preferred his old 'shag all the birds and hang out with rock stars' character. (NCFC) - lurd, May 7, 09:11:17
- Sure (NCFC) - JD3, May 7, 07:45:00
- Cameron and Gove send their kids to a highly selective school. (NCFC) - avenging canary, May 7, 08:09:55
- Not a bad summary. (NCFC) - avenging canary, May 7, 07:19:40
- It's a rubbish summary tbh (NCFC) - CWC, May 7, 08:09:51
- "top conservatives weren't state educated, when half of thd cabinet was" (NCFC) - Larry Hagman, May 7, 10:46:33
- BSF launch better than free school programme. (NCFC) - avenging canary, May 7, 08:13:52
- I thought (NCFC) - camcan, May 7, 08:33:01
- Hahaha (n/m) (NCFC) - Yellalee, May 7, 09:06:53
- Ha! Coursework cheater. (n/m) (NCFC) - avenging canary, May 7, 08:42:09
- I thought (NCFC) - camcan, May 7, 08:33:01
- It's a rubbish summary tbh (NCFC) - CWC, May 7, 08:09:51
- Tories just want an elitist "society" them (servants) and us (rulers) (n/m) (NCFC) - essexcanaryOTBC, May 7, 02:59:25
- I doubt they've ever needed NHS care either. Private all the way! (n/m) (NCFC) - essexcanaryOTBC, May 7, 02:52:17
- there's an enormous body of in-depth research on this (NCFC) - Worzel Scrimmage, May 7, 00:24:51
- Too many words (n/m) (NCFC) - SCC 28, May 7, 00:22:15
- and too few paragraphs (NCFC) - Tombs, May 7, 09:53:37
- Do people actually read this dullard's ill-informed rubbish? (n/m) (NCFC) - Pygmy bulb, May 7, 08:31:55
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