No capitalisation for starters ("official sms" doesn't scream for attention)

No separation between "official sms" and "Krumar [...]"
Not all facts present (where's the international clearance?)

All rather hurried I think with no attention to detail, which is most important if you want to take the crown from AB or blindas then you'll need to up your game

Posted By: BerlinCanary, Aug 1, 14:27:24