I think it's rather good...

...a few thoughts:

1. Was Kabaddi in there (in realation to Mr Holt)?
2. Cheese on toast
3. Sheds are best.
4. Was WW2 and all the others there (prob a bit of a yawn but does happen)?
5. Perhaps a mention of the 'taboo' subjects of racism and the other one that has escaped me and the fact it always, always kicks off when they appear.
6. North v South - which is better.

As I think of more I'll try add to here, but need to do some work...good effort...

Posted By: Fierce Panda, Aug 4, 09:42:34