Excessive use of the word I in the last line spoils it.

Posted By: sheffieldcanary, Apr 23, 14:03:11

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He only used it once, how can that be excessive?
Posted By: Old Git, Apr 23, 14:07:04
On reflection, yes. That serves to demonstrate the value of a good proof reader.
Posted By: jafski, Apr 23, 14:06:03

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