Overall......

The best i've read yet.

However, you appear to have a habit of writing every sentence in the most pretentious way possible.

For me, the key is in your points, which are excellent, not the writing, which however clever won't sell.

Posted By: Johnny Comecardiff, Feb 28, 21:35:11

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