Looks good; effective sales job

A foo points

The photo of the outside on the Welcome page (the photo with the disability cart just visible) is just s**t. Shit s**t s**t. Grey sky, lots of grey road in the foreground, looks like a nondescript average pub in a concrete jungle. MUST get a different one, especially since the other photos make it look so good.

"real ale drinking away fans are always welcome to join us" - what, do they get asked their drink preferences at the door and turned away if they say they're after a Becks or a glass of wine? Reads a bit wared, that do.

NG looks rather menacing in that picture. I think it's because he has what on inspection is a jacket hung over the back of his chair, but which at first glance looks like another bit of him (since the grey matches whatever he is wearing under his City shirt). The result is that he looks like Giant Haystacks in a bad mood. Would put me right off going there.

MULTIPLE, MULTIPLE apostrophe violations. It's the King's Arms, not the Kings Arms.

Well done though.

Posted By: Old Git, Nov 9, 18:26:50

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