Looks a lovely place

Minor copy niggles:

I'm not convinced about "top notch" - it jars a bit. "Terrific" would sound twee though.

The Farm and Its History (no apostrophe)

Reads well, though, and if I were in the market for that kind of break I'd certainly be tempted!

Posted By: Old Man, May 6, 12:13:33

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