APB did the saving, really, I just stood there and kept an eye on things!

The first draft of pretty much everything I write contains clunking, sub-clause-laden sentences - usually I print things out and rework those. Yesterday I didn't, so I think the thing to learn is not to get cocky and forget to be thorough :)

Posted By: Ottosson Foxtrot, Oct 25, 11:59:12