Thanks for that
You're right, that sentence in particular doesn't read back very well! I do really, really like sub-clauses though - I blame my extensive time in academia for that! Feedback about the voice is very welcome too, so cheers.
Posted By: Ottosson Foxtrot, Oct 25, 11:53:28
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- I read your bit in The League Paper a minute ago.
Posted By: Garry Brooke, Oct 25, 11:57:39 - 3My pleasure
Posted By: Old Git, Oct 25, 11:55:22 - 2^ thinly veiled fuck off Git post ^
Posted By: duke of york, Oct 25, 11:54:03
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