"Stan is now blurry-eyed, staring at his PC and..."

Sounding like a total c**t. Who is this joke? Is it just Waghorn or one of the others under an alias? Stop talking in the third person. Write a proper article. I think some of the points trying to be made are probably valid but its just so unreadable.

Posted By: sheffieldcanary, Aug 19, 15:56:48