No capitalisation for starters ("official sms" doesn't scream for attention)
No separation between "official sms" and "Krumar [...]"
Not all facts present (where's the international clearance?)
All rather hurried I think with no attention to detail, which is most important if you want to take the crown from AB or blindas then you'll need to up your game
Posted By: BerlinCanary on August 1st 2008 at 14:27:24
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- official sms Krumar season long loan (n/m) (NCFC) - stringersrevenge, Aug 1, 13:45:27
- ^^^^^ How not to do an Official SMS (NCFC) - BerlinCanary, Aug 1, 14:08:44
- What's your beef Berliner? (n/m) (NCFC) - stringersrevenge, Aug 1, 14:21:03
- No capitalisation for starters ("official sms" doesn't scream for attention) (NCFC) - BerlinCanary, Aug 1, 14:27:24
- Bum firmly slapped (n/m) (NCFC) - stringersrevenge, Aug 1, 16:20:11
- No capitalisation for starters ("official sms" doesn't scream for attention) (NCFC) - BerlinCanary, Aug 1, 14:27:24
- What's your beef Berliner? (n/m) (NCFC) - stringersrevenge, Aug 1, 14:21:03
- Told you! (n/m) (NCFC) - Superstar D J, Aug 1, 14:06:26
- ^^^^^ How not to do an Official SMS (NCFC) - BerlinCanary, Aug 1, 14:08:44
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