Bit late mate but cheers
Anyway......
Cuppel er points:
1. Foist and foremost, you obviously know yer NCFC onions so that's yer first hook. Go forward two spaces.
2. WOTB is a messageboard for, at best, freaks with the attention span of a retarded goldfish so verbose posts will inevitably not go down like an attacking portugese midfielder.
3. Yer dunt yet know your audience and that is the nub of the problem as far as my limited state educated intelligence can make out.
So, forget about developing your style to become more pithy because that would only end up in summit of nothing (which clearly you int) but, find yer niche and then find the vehicle in which to deliver it. Blogs and messageboards will help you along the way but, really, come on!?
Posted By: Tomblander on February 28th 2007 at 21:34:26
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- FAO my less-than-adoring public (NCFC) - thebigfeller, Feb 28, 20:43:24
- KISS (NCFC) - thesmallchap, Mar 1, 09:48:00
- one comment from a sem-professional subeditor (NCFC) - elk, Feb 28, 23:02:52
- some bloody editor. SEMI (n/m) (NCFC) - elk, Feb 28, 23:03:56
- Bit late mate but cheers (NCFC) - Tomblander, Feb 28, 21:34:26
- Christ..... (NCFC) - Johnny Comecardiff, Feb 28, 21:28:32
- Overall...... (NCFC) - Johnny Comecardiff, Feb 28, 21:35:11
- Good article, big feller ! (n/m) (NCFC) - colincanary, Feb 28, 21:17:43
- My approach to brevity is to print out every article I write, as a first draft (NCFC) - Ottosson Foxtrot, Feb 28, 20:52:28
- Blaise Pascal (NCFC) - yarmyyarmy, Feb 28, 21:13:36
- LOL! Now there was a man who knew what he was talking about (n/m) (NCFC) - thebigfeller, Feb 28, 21:15:40
- Yep, agreed: was a good night Otto, and great meeting you! (n/m) (NCFC) - thebigfeller, Feb 28, 21:12:26
- Blaise Pascal (NCFC) - yarmyyarmy, Feb 28, 21:13:36
- not sure what the criticisms were exactly (NCFC) - Dave in France, Feb 28, 20:47:26
- Me too. Except the 'This observer notes....' I hate that. Monbiot wouuld never do it. (n/m) (NCFC) - The Editor of Milk, Feb 28, 21:16:11
- Thanks! (n/m) (NCFC) - thebigfeller, Feb 28, 21:12:45
- Me too. (n/m) (NCFC) - Arganth, Feb 28, 20:57:01
- yep, I like the read too! (n/m) (NCFC) - admckechnie, Feb 28, 20:59:19
- ...and with rest of message... (NCFC) - Arganth, Feb 28, 20:58:56
- Not yet: jambocanary, if you're out there, send me an email (NCFC) - thebigfeller, Feb 28, 21:11:56
- Also JP, can you send Harry & Penny an email too ? (NCFC) - Arganth, Feb 28, 21:14:00
- Not yet: jambocanary, if you're out there, send me an email (NCFC) - thebigfeller, Feb 28, 21:11:56
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