Better

The last line would be better as "Or you'll end up with cocks up your rings", not only for better scansion but also to rhyme better with King's. And there's an AV in the first line. But good.

Posted By: Old Git on November 10th 2006 at 15:06:42

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There once (Other Football) - Steve in Holland, Nov 10, 14:46:39
- There once was... (Other Football) - Pixelman, Nov 10, 15:09:31
  - i like (Other Football) - blindasabat, Nov 10, 15:18:31
  - AV (Other Football) - Old Git, Nov 10, 15:12:18
    - 8000 (n/m) (Other Football) - Brom, Nov 10, 15:15:10
- I mean wrong thread day (n/m) (Other Football) - pants, Nov 10, 15:00:58
- There once (Other Football) - Small, Nov 10, 15:00:15
  - Better (Other Football) - Old Git, Nov 10, 15:06:42
    - Except Terry doesn't rhyme with wary (Other Football) - Steve in Holland, Nov 10, 15:08:37
      - Does if you're from Norfolk, plagiarising Dutch boy (Other Football) - Old Git, Nov 10, 15:10:04
      - Oooooo get her (n/m) (Other Football) - Small, Nov 10, 15:09:37
        
        9 (n/m) (Other Football) - Old Git, Nov 10, 15:13:04
  - Twat (n/m) (Other Football) - Steve in Holland, Nov 10, 15:05:58
- Improvement (Other Football) - Steve in Holland, Nov 10, 14:52:02
  - Not much of an improvement mind (n/m) (Other Football) - Brom, Nov 10, 14:54:42
    - Not to mention being largely plagiarised! (n/m) (Other Football) - Old Git, Nov 10, 15:05:33
      - From where would that be ? I admit I copied (Other Football) - Steve in Holland, Nov 10, 15:06:20
        
        ... (Other Football) - Old Git, Nov 10, 15:07:55
        
        FFS (Other Football) - Steve in Holland, Nov 10, 15:09:37
        
        You nicked "frequented" from me too, clogster. (Other Football) - yarmyyarmy, Nov 10, 15:13:00
        
        Yeah I stole "and" and "they" as well. Sorry. (n/m) (Other Football) - Steve in Holland, Nov 10, 15:20:04
        
        But "pretty young things" and "mings" were just an unfortunate coincidence (n/m) (Other Football) - Old Git, Nov 10, 15:25:02
        
        Keep prodding him Old Git. He's going to blow any moment now (n/m) (Other Football) - Small, Nov 10, 15:34:29
        
        ????? (Other Football) - Old Git, Nov 10, 15:11:42
    - I liked it (n/m) (Other Football) - Steve in Holland, Nov 10, 15:05:02
    - Yeah great idea. I struggle to know what the fooks going on as it is (n/m) (Other Football) - Small, Nov 10, 15:04:24

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