My first thought was "why another one"...
...but this looks potentially interesting - you'll need to keep getting the interviews of course. "Bassong is the answer at the back" - nice clickbait there :) I liked the squad selector, even better would be the option not to finish and tweet, but finish and give me a URL I can paste on here (we often discuss lineups/formations and this would be a great tool for that). The navigation is clean and clear.
The writing of the articles is in places not good enough. Apart from typos (e.g. "strengthen" instead of "strengthened") no-one should need to explain the difference between "paltry" and "poultry", for example. Phrases like "As I previously alluded to, I'm not wholly against the idea of..." are clunky. Generally you need an editor.
People like Mick Dennis write interesting stuff on a crap platform, I don't know if you could get his copy on yours.
In sum: looks nice, well put together, some nice site features, the writing lets it down a bit.
And you need to tell us what you had for lunch.
Posted By: Old Man on August 1st 2014 at 17:50:01
Message Thread
- I'd like to welcome you all to a new Norwich website called The Carrow Crowd (NCFC) - AwayWithTheCanaries, Aug 1, 17:36:08
- The inverted wingers article is good pal (n/m) (NCFC) - MIKEWALKER, Aug 1, 18:50:14
- That's mine - thank you (n/m) (NCFC) - AwayWithTheCanaries, Aug 1, 18:51:27
- I'll do my comment here (NCFC) - Huge Small, Aug 1, 20:07:25
- Yes, we became far, far too predictable. Thanks for spending time reading (n/m) (NCFC) - AwayWithTheCanaries, Aug 1, 20:27:07
- no worries. It looks a decent site (NCFC) - Huge Small, Aug 1, 20:33:51
- Yes, we became far, far too predictable. Thanks for spending time reading (n/m) (NCFC) - AwayWithTheCanaries, Aug 1, 20:27:07
- I'll do my comment here (NCFC) - Huge Small, Aug 1, 20:07:25
- That's mine - thank you (n/m) (NCFC) - AwayWithTheCanaries, Aug 1, 18:51:27
- Thoughts (NCFC) - Larry Hagman, Aug 1, 18:48:52
- There are a lot of miserable fuckers on here (NCFC) - ChengdeCanary, Aug 1, 18:42:46
- Thank you (n/m) (NCFC) - AwayWithTheCanaries, Aug 1, 18:45:19
- love the look of it but some of the articles are poorly written (NCFC) - earlydoors, Aug 1, 18:13:53
- Ps McNally will be going through it with a fine tooth comb (NCFC) - Tony Martin, Aug 1, 18:12:57
- We've already spoken to the media at the club. (n/m) (NCFC) - AwayWithTheCanaries, Aug 1, 18:17:08
- I love it but is there a place were people slag each other off & aren't allowed (NCFC) - lovely old job, Aug 1, 18:12:16
- Bristol (n/m) (NCFC) - Graham Nine, Aug 1, 18:42:41
- Bristol (n/m) (NCFC) - Bristol Graham, Aug 1, 18:15:49
- Like the design, layout, graphics, usability. (NCFC) - Tony Martin, Aug 1, 18:11:51
- That seems to be the consensus. (NCFC) - AwayWithTheCanaries, Aug 1, 18:19:03
- Looks nice. Clean and responsive design. (NCFC) - Arizona Bay, Aug 1, 18:08:58
- Looks nice (n/m) (NCFC) - Arizona Bay, Aug 1, 18:07:00
- Arses. TBC. (n/m) (NCFC) - Arizona Bay, Aug 1, 18:07:20
- My first thought was "why another one"... (NCFC) - Old Man, Aug 1, 17:50:01
- Thank you (NCFC) - AwayWithTheCanaries, Aug 1, 17:56:59
- Sound lunch choice :) (n/m) (NCFC) - Old Man, Aug 1, 17:59:28
- Thank you (NCFC) - AwayWithTheCanaries, Aug 1, 17:56:59
- Couple of nice bits and pieces on there.. (NCFC) - Bonjour, Aug 1, 17:45:14
- Thank you! (n/m) (NCFC) - AwayWithTheCanaries, Aug 1, 17:49:18
- Before I / we look, I hope you are prepared for (constructive) criticism... (n/m) (NCFC) - Yellalee, Aug 1, 17:37:48
- Always open for constructive criticism! (n/m) (NCFC) - AwayWithTheCanaries, Aug 1, 17:41:37
- Very first impression - looks good! (n/m) (NCFC) - Yellalee, Aug 1, 17:38:39
- The inverted wingers article is good pal (n/m) (NCFC) - MIKEWALKER, Aug 1, 18:50:14
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